Saturday, July 4, 2009

Kaafi Hai....


फ़साना मेरे दिल का कागज़ पर लिखा है,
एक ग़ज़ल समझ कर पढ़ लो तो काफ़ी है...

की थी मेहनत तुम्हे पाने की कितनी,
तुम कद्र कर लो तो काफ़ी है...

लिए थे कितने ज़ख्म दिल पर तुम्हारी खातिर,
दिल में अपने हमें बसा लो तो काफ़ी है...

ठोकरें खायी हैं इतनी कि मरहम ज़माने में नहीं,
तुम ऐतबार हम पर कर लो तो काफ़ी है...

निगाहें तरस जाती थी चेहरा तुम्हारा देखने को,
नज़रों में अपनी हमें बसा लो तो काफ़ी है...

याद करते हैं तुम्हे हर पल, कि याददाश्त मेरी तुम बन गए,
भूलो तुम हमें कभी तो काफ़ी है...

करते हैं हम तुम्हे मोहब्बत ज़माने में सब से ज्यादा,
तुम थोडी सी मोहब्बत हम से कर लो तो काफ़ी है...

25 comments:

  1. u r doin an excellent work...u r showin ur talent dat u can compose well...dats a gud part bt i wud say dnt do dat coz nw wen i read i get hurt and feel bad abt u...
    try writin in english...

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  2. der mite b sumne hu luvs u...u jus hv 2 wait 4 d rte tme..lol
    so happy...thnks a lot...outstndng..keep it up...

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  3. @ manali -
    thanks sis for dis sweet comment.... luvvd to see ur care for me.... n btw i'm not hurting myself... tc :)

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  4. @ shruti -
    why one? der might be more than one who luvs me.... lolz ;) thanks for d comment

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  5. haha....yeah rte nt ne mre den ne.
    ur wc

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  6. Hey. I particularly have a problem with this post. This one sounds like you are begging for love from somebody. I just didnt like this :

    "करते हैं हम तुम्हे मोहब्बत ज़माने में सब से ज्यादा,
    तुम थोडी सी मोहब्बत हम से कर लो तो काफ़ी है..."

    But its good.

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  7. @ trishala -
    Thanks for d comment.... I think i can clear ur confusion.... wat u r thinking is an ego problem.... N love n ego can never go hand in hand..... Love has to be sans ego.... N in luv u can never expect something back..... Love means sacrificing.... N u r lucky if u get ur true love..... Hope i cleared ur confusion..... Tc.....

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  8. awesome man !! how u write all those ??
    god bless u ! n keep on writing ...

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  9. @ preetam -
    thanks a lot man..... Hw i write these is a 'secret'..... Lolz...... It comes frm the bottom of my heart...... :)

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  10. Nice work dude...
    Main aapke dil k fasane ko ek gazhal samajh k HI padh raha hu ji
    Jaisa ki tumne likha hai ''KI THI MEHNAT TUMHE PAANE KI AAKHIR''
    to barkhurdar jara hame bhi batane ka kasth karoge ki aakhir wo thi kaun jise tumne paane k Liye itni mehnat ki thi...

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  11. @ kamlesh -
    thanks man..... Waise tu sudhrega nahi na? post mortem mat kiya kar.......

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  12. Kyu accha nahi lagta kya...???
    agar accha nahi lagta to fir aise blog likhta kyu hai...jisse automatic aise que. Generate ho hi jaate hai
    Ab isme me kya kar sakta hu bol

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  13. @ kamlesh -
    Dude..... i just put my feelings over here..... N i dont ever justify myself to anybody..... So u have to read watever i post..... N keep commenting :) aise questions generate hote hai to hone de..... Lol

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  14. Great work, kp writing, waiting for more poems from you........

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  15. @ rashmi -
    thanks for appreciating my work n encouraging me to write more.... :)

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  16. very nice!!! isko maine gazhal samajh k hi padha h.keep it up yaar.......

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  17. @ tanuj -
    Thanks buddy :) keep reading n keep commenting

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  19. gr8 work...like it very much...nd one thing..whosoever she is..i m sure she is missing sth very spl in her lyf..nd dat jus becoz of u..
    so..if dere is sumone in ur heart..juz ask her out..not 4 urself bt 4 her..nd i m sure..she will shower the whole ocean of 'MOHABBAT' on u rather den just 'THODI SI MOHABBAT'....
    my heartiest wishes r with u..!!

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  20. @ prateek -
    Dis one's better.... Lolz ;)
    Btw i'm juss waitin 4 d right tym n d right person to come together.... :)

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  21. hiiiii boss aaj to tune record hi tod diya..............
    its a fantastick thought. good job man.keep it

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  22. @ aviral -
    thanks for the comment....

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  23. hummmm i think baby u are in love re ..
    tell me na whos tht lucky grl haaaaa
    relly nice post ..
    i can say tht it wud surely sm frm ur heart na baby
    really nice lines ........
    keep writing this type of posts

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  24. @ kailash -
    thanks man..... yes i'm in love..... wid MYSELF..... ladki ka toh pata nahi.... wo bhi mil hi jayegi.... Lol ;) n yes dis one's from d heart....

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