It isn't easy to tell someone you love,
It isn't easy to tell her that you care.
Its a feeling that's very special,
but you have nobody to share.
Its when you feel on top of the world,
and you feel good when you see her smile.
You feel like smiling with her,
and be with her all the while.
You love talking to her,
and the time flies by.
You start loving the nature,
the flowers, the petals, the birds in the sky.
You have that lovely feeling in ur heart,
but from others you try to hide.
And you search for your dearest friends,
to whom your feelings you can confide.
But they all tell you the same,
"Go tell her, before its too late..."
But due to fear of losing her you don't,
and you leave it on the fate.
You tried a lot to tell her,
but could never confess.
And then there are friends who are
eager to tell her and make it a mess.
But you prevent them from doing so,
You say "Not you, but I love her...
And I'm gonna tell her sooner or later...
I promise, I won't remain a silent lover forever..."
It isn't easy to tell her that you care.
Its a feeling that's very special,
but you have nobody to share.
Its when you feel on top of the world,
and you feel good when you see her smile.
You feel like smiling with her,
and be with her all the while.
You love talking to her,
and the time flies by.
You start loving the nature,
the flowers, the petals, the birds in the sky.
You have that lovely feeling in ur heart,
but from others you try to hide.
And you search for your dearest friends,
to whom your feelings you can confide.
But they all tell you the same,
"Go tell her, before its too late..."
But due to fear of losing her you don't,
and you leave it on the fate.
You tried a lot to tell her,
but could never confess.
And then there are friends who are
eager to tell her and make it a mess.
But you prevent them from doing so,
You say "Not you, but I love her...
And I'm gonna tell her sooner or later...
I promise, I won't remain a silent lover forever..."
PS : This is my first effort at writing a poetry in English. And this one's dedicated to that special one for whom I'm still waiting plus to those who suggested me to write in English, namely Trishala, Shruti Solanki (aka The Lonely Wanderer) and Manali Baldota, in that particular order.
PPS : This was my 100th post. Thanks for the support guys.
PPPS : This time I'm more eagerly waiting for your comments.
Hey budy very well written...n ya dnt forget da promise u made dat u wnt remain a silent lover...
ReplyDelete@ prashant -
ReplyDeletethanks for the comment man.... as n wen i find my special one, i'll keep my promise :)
hey fab work n a sweet composition-
ReplyDeleteBut they all tell you the same,
"Go tell her, before its too late..."
But due to fear of losing her you don't,
and you leave it on the fate.
Congratulations n keep writing, many more centuries to go....
@ rashmi -
ReplyDeletethanks.... n btw the lines dat u quoted above is the story of all hesitant silent lovers.... due to fear of losing their loved ones, they don't confess their love..... thanks a lot :) n ya dis is just the beginning..... aage aage dekho hota hai kya.....
A good attempt for the first timer..Hope u find the lady love in whose dedication u have written it.
ReplyDelete@ anamika -
ReplyDeleteAMEN !!!
n thanks for appreciation....
hey really wel written...waitng 4 day u gt ur special ne.lol...n keep writng such pst..i luv dem...
ReplyDeleten congrats..
@ shruti -
ReplyDeletethanks for d comment.... n evn i'm waiting for dat day....
gr8 man..tu toh original ashiq ban gaya hai!
ReplyDelete@ abhijeet -
ReplyDeletethanks for the comment.... finally u kept ur "GENTLEMAN's PROMISE".... lolz
kewl composition ankit. true emotions nothing else. anyone wud suggest u to confess ur feelings to the one u like. but in dat case, we might lose such a grt composer. but dats alryt. anywayzz thank uuu for mentioning mah name :P
ReplyDelete@ trishala -
ReplyDeleteu deserve to be mentioned in this post.... coz u were the first one who suggested to try out sumthng in english.... THANKS a ton for dat :)
It is one of the best poem with full of emotions & true love great going buddy.
ReplyDelete@ rishabh -
ReplyDeletethank you for ur generous appreciation :)
that is grratest thought of u. that all line showing true love.
ReplyDeleten it jst lyk that u standing in front of a girl n saying her to ur felling.
Good job Dude.
now its tim tell her about ur love, u jst go n tell..........
@ aviral -
ReplyDeletethanks a lot :) abey pehle koi milne toh de, fir bolunga.....
awesome...at last my wait ends..i ws waiting for dis very post 4m d tym u told me abut dis..nice job done...d simplicity with wich u put out ur feelings 4 dat some spl one...it is commendable..now i hope in future we get sth more like dat..by famous poet..Ankit aka virus...Lolz
ReplyDelete@ prateek -
ReplyDeletethanks a lot bro.... u were among the first few ppl who supported me n encouraged me to write more stuff like this one.... so u also deserve some credit..... n dude, i'm not a famous poet (n i dnt want to be one).... its jus a hobby dat i'm pursuing :) thanks a ton for dis
bro,nice poem...bt still u need 2 practice more on it...n it touchd me seriously...bt ws a gud attempt as a beginner...
ReplyDeletekeep writing...
@ manali -
ReplyDeletethanks sis..... actually i cosider dis one a pretty satisfying attempt for a beginner..... n i'll brush up my writing techniques..... thanks for appreciating n encouraging me :)
dude who is ur inspiration.....
ReplyDelete[ posted on Facebook on July 13 2009 at 7:18pm ]
this one is pretty good mate! :)
ReplyDelete[ posted on Facebook on July 14 2009 at 2:55 am ]
@ khuzaima -
ReplyDeletei don't know who my inspiration is.... haven't met dat special sumone yet.....
@ akshay -
ReplyDeletethanks man....
dude...phatang! i never thought u write....
ReplyDelete[ posted on Facebook on July 16 2009 at 1:01pm ]
@ nandan -
ReplyDeletethanks a lot man.... i do write....
dis was my 1st poem in eng... i've written a few in hindi... n i'm kinda liking it :p
write some songs please...... wud love to put a tune or 2....
ReplyDelete[ posted on Facebook on July 16 2009 at 1:05pm ]
@ nandan -
ReplyDeletedats a huge compliment man.... i'll try.... n thnks a ton again :)
wts dis all abt bro!! dis dys it sounds as if u hv fallen in love!!is it!!
ReplyDelete[ posted on Facebook on July 16 2009 at 4:51 pm ]
Shayar bhai.... Gr8 goin man.... Reaallllyyyyy a gr8 piece of work... Tc godbles n keep up d gud work....
ReplyDelete[ posted on Facebook on July 16 2009 at 6:36pm ]
too gud....
ReplyDelete[ posted on Facebook on July 16 2009 at 7:47pm ]
@ darshit -
ReplyDeletethanks for the comment man.... well i am not in love... n i'm tired of clarifying dis to each n evryone :(
@ akshay -
ReplyDeletethanks a lot bro :) dis is just d beginning, more to come.....
@ aneesh -
ReplyDeletethanks buddy....
Good one yaar :)
ReplyDelete[ posted on Facebook on July 17 2009 at 10:06pm ]
@ rashmi murthy -
ReplyDeletethanks :)