अब ज़रूरी ये नहीं साथ निभाओ ही सही,
अब तो तनहाई के संग रहना मैंने सीख लिया.
फूल अब तुम को मुबारक हो, उनकी खुशबू भी,
मैंने अब काँटों की दुनिया में रहना सीख लिया.
जब से जाना कि आंसुओं की नहीं है कीमत,
मैंने उस दिन से आंसुओं को पीना सीख लिया.
जब से तुम ने बुझाई है मेरी उम्मीदों की शमा,
मैंने उस दिन से अँधेरे में रहना सीख लिया.
nce ne..hrt tochng poem....keep it up
ReplyDelete@ shruti -
ReplyDeletethanks for the comment :)
aapki poetry acchi hai ankit lekin plz ye tasveer badal dijiye jo aadmi ke mann main nirasha ka bhav jagati hai.its horreble.
ReplyDelete@ kavita ji -
ReplyDeletethank u ma'am.... aapke jaisi poetess ne taareef kar di to aur kya chahiye.... i'll change the pic soon.... :)
aap falna main kahan rahte hain ankit.kya karte hain? do u know me?
ReplyDelete@ kavita ji -
ReplyDeletemera falna mein umbrella manufacturing ka business hai.... i know u very well ma'am....
I agree with Kavita ji, pic is really horrible, its terrifying.Ur poem is nice bt tht pic changes the whole mood of the poem, so even i'm requesting you to change it.
ReplyDeleteBt a nice wrk once again :)
@ rashmi -
ReplyDeletei'm sorry for the pic... i've changed it... thanks for the comment :)
This is not a better change Ankit.always think hopefull n be hopefull.becoz ur thinkings reflacts n effects ur life n ur goals. apne jeevan main aur vicharon main khoobsuti ko jagah do.
ReplyDeletereply on my blog.
@ kavita ji -
ReplyDeletei know dis.... still i cant put happy pictures when i'm not..... i'll try n do dat nay be next tym....
Hi ankit i know shayad ye comment tumhe accha na lage lekin ye blog padhne k baad mujhe majbooran ye likhna pada
ReplyDeleteU know kabhi kabhi zindagi me ye thokre Bahut kuch sikha jaati hai bilkul isi tarah Hasa kar rula jaati hai lekin aise himmat mat haarna mere bhai bas me itna keh sakta hu ki jitna jeena hai utna ujale me jiyo is tarah andhere me ghut ghut k mat jina dost Q ki bahot kuch baaki reh jata hai zindagi me aur is tarah aansu pite pite kisi ki tanhai me zindagi kab khatam ho jaati hai pata hi nahi chalta..or rahi baat kaanto ki duniya ki to wo tu har waqt hamare saath rehta hai iska matlab hum tumhe kaate chubhate hai ha??????
hmmm...
anyway nice blog n i agree with ''Dr. Kavita ji'' plz chng dis pic.
Agar bura laga to sorry
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@ kamlesh -
ReplyDeletethanks for such a consoling comment.... i'm actually feeling a bit better due to dis.... n dis comment of urs falls under a blog post category.... thnks a lot for bng der....