I shrink into a corner,
I look around,
I try to search for something,
But the dark of night blinded me.
What I look for, I don’t know,
I feel thirsty, I feel deprived,
And the world has abandoned me at this dreaded moment!!
I stumble as I try to stand,
I feel pain, the worst of it,
I want to scream,
But fear stops me.
What I fear, I don’t know.
I feel a pinch here; I feel a blow there,
And the world has abandoned me at this dreaded moment!!
I find no shoulder to cry,
I see no shadow across the room,
I feel no hand on my head,
I hear no words of comfort.
What I need, I don’t know.
I feel empty, I feel weak,
And the world has abandoned me at this dreaded moment!!
I want to escape,
I try to push away the dark,
I struggle to reach the light,
But my will has given up.
What life wants, I don’t know.
I feel isolated, I feel violated,
And even God has abandoned me at this dreaded moment!!
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updated later by Ankit...
PS : This is Garima's first blog post. Shower it with your love (read : comments) :p
I look around,
I try to search for something,
But the dark of night blinded me.
What I look for, I don’t know,
I feel thirsty, I feel deprived,
And the world has abandoned me at this dreaded moment!!
I stumble as I try to stand,
I feel pain, the worst of it,
I want to scream,
But fear stops me.
What I fear, I don’t know.
I feel a pinch here; I feel a blow there,
And the world has abandoned me at this dreaded moment!!
I find no shoulder to cry,
I see no shadow across the room,
I feel no hand on my head,
I hear no words of comfort.
What I need, I don’t know.
I feel empty, I feel weak,
And the world has abandoned me at this dreaded moment!!
I want to escape,
I try to push away the dark,
I struggle to reach the light,
But my will has given up.
What life wants, I don’t know.
I feel isolated, I feel violated,
And even God has abandoned me at this dreaded moment!!
----------
updated later by Ankit...
PS : This is Garima's first blog post. Shower it with your love (read : comments) :p
awesome..... expressed very well..... :)
ReplyDeleten congratulations for ur first post on gfn :)
ReplyDeletethnx ankit...fer helpin... n appreciating!!
ReplyDeletehey garima nice ne..really great...n keep pstng sch suffs..n bdw congo 4 ur frst pst...n i hpe 2 c anther ne soon frm ur sde....tc..
ReplyDeletehey shruti...thnk u so much...ur comment matters a lot!!
ReplyDeletei wil try to post anodr one soon!!
Nice compilation.....wow you really are venting out your feelings really wel..correct me if im wrong....:P
ReplyDeletethnx...kini!! luvd to c ur comment!!
ReplyDelete@ garima -
ReplyDeleteu need not say thanks to me.... u knw i'm very selfish.... i did dis to increase my blog's readers..... :p
jokes apart, still u dnt need to say 'thanks'.... keep writin :)
@ sanket -
ReplyDeletethanks for the comment..... keep visiting n i expect comments on my post too..... :p
It doesn't read like the first one.
ReplyDeleteIt is very well written.Keep up the good work.All the best.
@BK Chowla...thnk u so much for ur wishes!!
ReplyDeletehey gaima its very well written and congr8s 4 the 1st post
ReplyDelete@ rashi di -
ReplyDeletethanks for the comment.... n btw i'd be glad to see ur comments on my posts too.... :)
hey great work garima n congratulations for your first post.
ReplyDeleteAwaiting for more posts from you.
Keep writing :)
@ rashmi -
ReplyDeletethanks for the comment.... garima will be replying in sumtym....
@rashmi...thnx fer appreciating...i wil try to write anodr one soon!!
ReplyDelete@rashi di...thnx a lot!!
ReplyDeletelanguage 100/100
ReplyDeletethoughts 100/100
a great piece very well written.
good job sis!!!!!!
@ jeet -
ReplyDeletethanks for visiting the blog.... ur sis will thank u later... :p
btw chk out my posts too... n comment on them too... :)
hey jeet...thnx...luvd to c ur comment!!
ReplyDeletebttw chk out ankit's posts too!!
hey...truly amazing...very well expressed..no wonder its said tht words speak more than actions..applause!
ReplyDelete@khush....thnx a ton yaara fer cmmntin!!
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