Tuesday, June 23, 2009

Meri Khaamosh Chaahat



तेरा यूँ मुस्कुराना,
तेरा वो शर्माना,
तेरी हर वो अदा,
तेरी जुल्फों की घटा,
झील सी गहरी आँखें,
तेरी मखमली आवाज़,
तेरा दिलकश अंदाज़,
मुझपे जाने कैसा जादू कर गया,
मैं तेरी ओर खिंचा रहा,
मुझे तेरा दीवाना कर गया...
दोस्ती जाने कब चाहत में बदल गई,
पर मुझ से हाल-ए-दिल बताने की हिम्मत हुई...
शायद तुम्हारी चाहत से ज्यादा,
तुम्हे खो देने का डर था...
डर था कि कहीं तुम
मुझ से खफा हो जाओ,
शायद तुम्हे खो देने के डर से
तुम से कुछ कह पाया...
मैंने सोचा कभी कभी तुम्हे भी
मेरे प्यार का एहसास हो ही जाएगा,
मगर यह हुआ,
ना मैं कुछ कह सका,
ना ही तुम कुछ समझ पायी...
और मेरी चाहत एक सपना बन के रह गई,
मेरी खामोश चाहत का एक हसीन सपना.....

मेरा मानना है कि प्यार का मतलब
सिर्फ़ पाना ही नहीं होता
प्यार में कुछ पाने से ज्यादा
अपने प्यार की खुशी की चाह होती है
मेरी तमन्ना है तुम खुश रहो
तुम्हारा यह खामोश आशिक
तुम्हे खुश देख के ही खुश रह लिया करेगा....

The lines written above are not meant to express ANYTHING. They may or may not follow any rhyme scheme. In fact, I did not write them just 'coz I wanted to write a poem or something. It just came to my mind and compelled me to post it here. I do not know why I was so tempted to post this. I just need your comments on this.

Eagerly waiting,
Ankit

28 comments:

  1. Ankit,it is very clear that it has come straight from the heart.May be,you should develop this talent/hobby.So long as it is kied and appreciated,don't worry why you wrote this.

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  2. @ Mr B K Chowla -
    thanks sir.... Actually i write dis as and when i get sumthng in my mind.... I dont know who my inspiration (technically :: muse) is.... But whoever she is, i love to write dis.... Actually i did not want to publish dis, but two of my friends forced me to post it....

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  3. hey bhai... i feel that what u have written is straight from your heart,i can feel the emotions in that poem. Beautifully composed and written... i think that your dedication will be noticed by the one you love... Be happy.. all the best...

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  4. @ manali -
    Thanks a lot.... Actually what i feel rarely gets expressed directly by me.... And u know dis very well..... I thought dat framing it in words wud be better..... I did that but i was a bit confusd whther to post it or not..... But so far i hav rcvd positive comments....

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  6. sorry dude comment karne me thoda late ho gaya...wo actualy time hi nahi mila...
    anyway nice blog yaar
    u r genius...
    may i hv 2 kw abt she..
    who is she yaar???
    plz jara batana shayad me teri kuch help kar saku

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  7. @ kamlesh -
    Thnks.... N remember bettter late than never..... by d way evn i dnt knw who she is..... Jab pata chalega, bata dunga.....

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  8. ANKIT,
    I JUST PASSED BY YOUR BLOG WHILE SURFING ON THE NET. I DON'T KNOW YOU PERSONALLY BUT I CAN TELL YOU ONE THING THAT I THINK LOVE IS IN THE AIR FOR YOU. AND YES, THIS REALLY REFLECTS THE TRUE FEELINGS OF YOUR HEART. VERY NICELY WRITTEN. AND THE RHYME SCHEME DOESNT REALLY MATTER WHEN YOU ARE POURING YOUR HEART AWAY.

    I LOVED IT.

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  9. AND ONE LAST THING-IF YOU LOVE SOMEONE GO TELL HER. OR IF YOU CANT, ANYHOW MAKE HER READ THIS, SHE WONT BE ABLE TO SAY NO. GOOD LUCK

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  10. @ sujeet -
    its so kind of u to comment on the blog. i feel overwhelmed at the response i am getting even from the people i dont know. well, even i dont know whether luv is in the air or not :)

    thanks a lot again for spending ur precious time for me :)

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  11. superb composed...its vry clear dat u hv written it frm ur heart...wel hu evr d grl is te her she vont te u...coz til vht i no true luv nvr waits...lol..so all d best..n keep it up..

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  12. @ shruti -
    thank u very much. yeah.... dis came directly from the heart... btw i expected an early comment from u..... urs is comment # 11

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  14. @ 現在建築式™ / Hsinchu (Taiwan) -
    plz dnt use my blog to promote urs...

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  15. Really sweet. I particularly liked de way in which you described the whole thing. Commendable stuff. I am ur fan. Waiting for some more stuff like this....

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  16. @ trishala -
    so sweet of u to comment... i didnt knw it was dis sweet... i m just very touched wid d response i got :)

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  17. kya likha hai tune esa likha hai jo aaj kal har kisi aasiq k sath hota hai so teri feelings un sabhi k liye hai jo pyar karte hai realy very good emotion in it lovely......u r gr8 aaj tu mera frd kehlane k kabil hai good n best of luck 4 ur emotional life

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  18. @ yogesh -
    Thanks a lot for such a nice comment man.....

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  19. hiiiiiiiiii mar jawa ise blog par...........
    blog padhne se lagta hai tune ye kis k liye likha hai.....its ur true felling.....na
    mujhe laga tu Ankit hai bt tu bhi kisi ka aashiq hai hai..u knw Ankit i jst love thought on love........so plz continue bloging on love

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  20. @ aviral -
    Thanks a ton for dis.... I just framed my thoughts into words.... aur maine bhi ye nahi socha tha ke ye itni khoobsurat kavita ban jaayegi..... :) keep watching for more....

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  21. Very Good!!!This came directly from your heart. Plz tell me "Who is she???" Bcoz use bhi batana jaroori h na!!!!!!

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  22. @ tanuj -
    Thnks buddy.... Evn i dont knw who 'she' is....? Dats still a mystery.... Tujhe pata chale to batana..... :)

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  23. nice poem ankit.......bt temme who is dt special 1

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  24. @ darshit -
    thank u very very much for the comment man..... jus loved to see ur name on d blog.... anyways wen i'll find dat special one, tujhe zaroor bataunga..... :)

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  25. Wow, very nice, i m really impressed.......
    Hamare dil main bhi gum hai tumhari tarah, tum to fir bhi sayari se kam chala lete ho hum to wo bhi nahi kar sakte............

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  26. @ daniel property mgmt -
    Thnks for d comment..... aur waise yeh gham nahi hai.... Yeh mere dil ke jazbaat hai..... Anyways thanks again....

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  27. very nice piece of literature..!!
    its something dat straightway touches d heart of d reader..keep it up...awesome stuff..

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  28. @ prateek -
    I'm very very thankful to u..... U r one of those closest frns who keep encouraging me for dis.....thanks for being der always :) n ya keep watching.... More to follow :)

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